<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="overflow-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;"><div><div><div></div><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On Jul 10, 2023, at 19:27, Ruth Duerr via Esip-sustainabledm <esip-sustainabledm@lists.esipfed.org> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;">Hi folks,<div><br></div><div>I’ve completed, with lot’s of suggestions and comments, draft text for the Collective benefit section of the <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DlcDNCyzV6GjNzulz25lPDeXx0EQ-28xJ_7Nv2InZz0/edit?usp=sharing">paper</a> (pages roughly 8-10). I am wondering if you could take a quick look to see if that part is headed in an OK way. I’d like to finish the next 3 parts (ARE of CARE) before ESIP, so really would like to get your general impressions over the next day or two…</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div><br></div><div>Ruth</div><div><br></div><div>PS: I will be adding the diagrams here in the next day or so as well….</div><div><br></div></div><br>_______________________________________________<br>Esip-sustainabledm mailing list<br>To start a new topic: Esip-sustainabledm@lists.esipfed.org<br>To unsubscribe and manage prefs: https://lists.esipfed.org/mailman/listinfo/esip-sustainabledm<br></div></blockquote></div><br></div></div></body></html>